Saturday, August 14, 2010

Creative Writing Sample

The Dirty Truth

Looking across the long beautiful beach of Florida as the sun sets with its smooth sand that looks as if the sun hits it just right it would sparkle and shine. Destiny thought to herself, how could I let John leave without telling him? Was it real? Should John know? I must tell him she says as she gets up pacing slowly towards the ramp entrance by the side walk. Destiny hops into her Monti Carlo hoping that what she had to say would convince him to take her back; after all she is a very beautiful women with a glow that a thousand men can admire. When god made her he sprinkled her with sunshine and love.

Finally arriving at the condominium where John stayed, Destiny stopped and gasped at the sight of a big sign out front that read for sale. Destiny cautiously walked towards the door. Bullets of sweet sweat pouring from her forehead even though it was 65 degrees outside and a light wind was blowing. A smell came from inside as she crept closer. It smelled as if a big meal was cooking- collide greens, cornbread, yams, and pork chops. Destiny shifted from the door to the window peeking to see who was all inside through the window of the condominium. As she peeked through the window thoughts of what happened ran through her mind. How he caught her in bed with that other guy. How embarrassed was she! She did not see anyone so she moved back towards the door ready to knock but it was opened slightly already so she eased in slowly and peeked around the corner of the door.

Gasping and trying to catch herself, she rushed back to her car leaving the door to the condo wide opened. She turned her car on and tears started pouring from her eyes as she drove back to the beach. The beach was her thinking place. She's been going there since she was a little girl. She had to think everything over. I can't believe I saw him on the couch freaking it with another man. Oh my God, destiny said. Destiny finally thought to herself, I must go back to the condo and handle this like a woman. There is something that I must tell him and after everything that has is going on I know it's the right time.

When Destiny arrived at the condo she sat there staring at the door thinking of a way to tell him. Then she got out and told herself that it will turn out however it will turn out but at least he'll know the truth. She moves towards the door and knocks on it. A anonymous voice says who is it? It's Destiny, Destiny says. Destiny who? says the anonymous voice. Is John here? says destiny. Hold on the anonymous voice says.

The door opens and she walks in and
sees a man on a couch and John standing on the side of the couch next to him. WHAT? says John angrily. We need to talk says Destiny. About what says John. I need to tell you something in private says Destiny. Whatever you can say to me you can say to Raul says Raul. Okay I love you and I want you to give us a second chance. I'm nothing without you.I know its been only three months but I really do love you says Destiny. Why should I believe that says John. Because I'm going to tell you a secret. You know we haven't done anything sexually yet-I've been scared, I've been scared, she repeated. After today I feel more comfortable with telling you now says Destiny. Look trick, how just tell him and bounce, says Raul. Excuse me? I will whoop yo, says Destiny while being quickly interrupted by John. Tell me what you have to tell me okay! Says John. Okay, just control your man before I get him. I know that you are with him, says Destiny. We ain't been doing nothing, you know what better yet leave says John.

I came here to pour my heart out to you, to tell you that I love you and how you gonna do me like this. I've changed says Destiny. I hope you don't believe her says Raul. I don't know says John, as an argument between John and Raul arises. Destiny shouts, what I came to tell you was that I am really a man!








No comments:

Post a Comment